This is the 3rd version
of the previz with new sound effects as well as a fixed animation. I still have
to add more sound effects but I feel the animation is ready to render.
The transition between the plane and the barber shop - the second of the planes can still be seen travelling on the back plane even when the barbershop is mostly in place; just get rid of this plane after it goes behind the wall of the barbershop (i.e. we don't want to see it come out of the other side and distract)
Don't cross fade between the 'Fin' title and 'By Aidan Codd' - it looks scrappy; either fade one text out completely and then fade up your name, or don't fade at all; just have Fin followed by 'By Aidan Codd' as hard edits - either way it will be an improvement.
Generally speaking, this pre-viz process is fine-tuning your film effectively - and now it's important that you YOU know when it's ready to go 'render'...
okay - final observations:
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Don't cross fade between the 'Fin' title and 'By Aidan Codd' - it looks scrappy; either fade one text out completely and then fade up your name, or don't fade at all; just have Fin followed by 'By Aidan Codd' as hard edits - either way it will be an improvement.
Generally speaking, this pre-viz process is fine-tuning your film effectively - and now it's important that you YOU know when it's ready to go 'render'...