Hey Aidan - this is good that you're working into the face, but, when it comes to sharks, isn't the mouth arrangement the other way around - i.e. that the top of the shark's 'face' extends over the bottom jaw?
Here, you're beginning to look a bit Godzilla-like - reptillian, as opposed to fishy; take another look at your reference images - and also, do consider sharpening a pencil and working in something other than biro!
Hey Aidan - this is good that you're working into the face, but, when it comes to sharks, isn't the mouth arrangement the other way around - i.e. that the top of the shark's 'face' extends over the bottom jaw?
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Here, you're beginning to look a bit Godzilla-like - reptillian, as opposed to fishy; take another look at your reference images - and also, do consider sharpening a pencil and working in something other than biro!