Afternoon Aidan - how satisfying to see you working in different media; now, as you move into the final stages, let's see you push for greater sophistication in terms of the detailing; I want to see more information around the mouth area (the gums, the teeth, the jaw) and don't forget to hold back some of yourself too; let's see 'Aidan' shine out; I like the 'mood' of the image second from bottom; your hybrid looks so melancholy - a true 'fish out of water' - and the biro image third down from the top has a real sense of aggro and anxiety about it - very Expressionist, with all those hard, exploding lines...
Afternoon Aidan - how satisfying to see you working in different media; now, as you move into the final stages, let's see you push for greater sophistication in terms of the detailing; I want to see more information around the mouth area (the gums, the teeth, the jaw) and don't forget to hold back some of yourself too; let's see 'Aidan' shine out; I like the 'mood' of the image second from bottom; your hybrid looks so melancholy - a true 'fish out of water' - and the biro image third down from the top has a real sense of aggro and anxiety about it - very Expressionist, with all those hard, exploding lines...
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