However, I'd like to see you working in different media too - try working in Photoshop from beginning to end, for example. Of all your visualisations, the bottom drawing is the most effective, with the dorsal fin and neck joining; I like the posture too - but I think you should re-consider the shape of your head; in all your drawings you seem to making it very round and 'wide' proportionally; why not consider taking on more of the 'spear-shape' characteristic of the shark?
Hey Aidan, your biro-based drawings have their charms - indeed, they remind me of the illustrations for Tim Burton's Oyster Boy poems:
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However, I'd like to see you working in different media too - try working in Photoshop from beginning to end, for example. Of all your visualisations, the bottom drawing is the most effective, with the dorsal fin and neck joining; I like the posture too - but I think you should re-consider the shape of your head; in all your drawings you seem to making it very round and 'wide' proportionally; why not consider taking on more of the 'spear-shape' characteristic of the shark?